Strange Sweet Song - Adi Rule

I'm aware of my own bias towards third person present, so I'm not letting it affect my judgement, but I do not like it.

 

I'm also trying to figure out if we're going backwards in time for flashbacks or what's going on. And I'd prefer if the POV could stay with the main character, but maybe that's why it's in third person.

 

But totally LOVING all the music references.