No, I'm sorry, I'm not going to finish this.
I really, really don't like the writing style.
And I hate that I can't quite articulate why. There's nothing wrong with it, it's not quite jarring, it's certainly not offensive. It's just really, really not working for me. It's quite heavy on the worldbuilding and I don't like the narrator's voice at all.
I'm not going to waste time trawling through a novel I'm not enjoying only to give it one or two stars when I can quit now and not rate it.